I was away for a long weekend and am graaadually catching up on everything I missed, so sorry for a late response!
This was beautiful! Aw, Cordy. I love how you've got this sort of magical, dreamlike, storybook kind of narrative voice going on, and then every once in awhile these snappy Cordelia-isms will jump in: Honestly. It’s just plus and minus, dumbass. In what way was he a champion? Hee!
Anyway, I think this was a beautiful way to take us through Cordelia's entire journey, starting as a superficial girl and then seeing the person she gradually became through growth and experience. Awesome! I haven't read the original story yet - definitely will soon!
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Date: 2007-05-03 10:42 am (UTC)This was beautiful! Aw, Cordy. I love how you've got this sort of magical, dreamlike, storybook kind of narrative voice going on, and then every once in awhile these snappy Cordelia-isms will jump in: Honestly. It’s just plus and minus, dumbass. In what way was he a champion? Hee!
Anyway, I think this was a beautiful way to take us through Cordelia's entire journey, starting as a superficial girl and then seeing the person she gradually became through growth and experience. Awesome! I haven't read the original story yet - definitely will soon!