I love this! This definitely doesn't suck and I think there's a nice balance of the angst that would underlie a Buffy/Faith relationship with the fluff and hotness. I loved the structure of this - very effective. And this is awesome: Buffy was on her hands and knees, her panties ringing around her lower thighs like remnants of that freaky Japanese rope torture Faith never had the patience to try. The tiny strips of fabric cut into Buffy’s flesh, leaving needless welts beneath them. Maybe they’d stay until the next day. She should have rug burns, too: palms, knees, face.
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Date: 2007-09-12 12:04 am (UTC)Buffy was on her hands and knees, her panties ringing around her lower thighs like remnants of that freaky Japanese rope torture Faith never had the patience to try. The tiny strips of fabric cut into Buffy’s flesh, leaving needless welts beneath them. Maybe they’d stay until the next day. She should have rug burns, too: palms, knees, face.
Faith liked leaving marks. I was here.
Really awesome fic! :D