Beautiful and lyrical, and I love the ambiguity of the ending.
A half-smile turned up the corner of Angel’s mouth. I have a friend?
Oh! This just about broke my heart.
Really gorgeous language in this, and you capture the complexity of the B/A relationship so well. Thank you so much for a wonderful contribution to this ficathon.
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Date: 2008-08-17 03:25 pm (UTC)A half-smile turned up the corner of Angel’s mouth. I have a friend?
Oh! This just about broke my heart.
Really gorgeous language in this, and you capture the complexity of the B/A relationship so well. Thank you so much for a wonderful contribution to this ficathon.